Thursday 27 October 2011

Treatment


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1. Ext. Street, morning
a. Fox and Chinchilla walk to the café.
b. People are greeting both of them, but Chinchilla is getting more praises.
c. Fox is jealous because he’s a little bit ignored by the people.
a. Birds chirping -> to show that it’s in the morning.
b. People praises Chinchilla more -> shows that he is a good guy and more likeable.
c. Fox states that he’s jealous.
2. Ext. Alleyway, night
a. Fox walks alone at night.
b. Cat and Peacock gossips about how nice Chinchilla is.
c. Fox overheard them talking.
a. Cat thinks that Chinchilla is the better man.
b. Fox hates the fact that Cat likes Chinchilla better than him, and thus he becomes enraged.
3. Ext. Chinchilla’s den, day
a. Fox knocks Chinchilla’s door.
b. Cat and Peacock pass the two of them and overheard them talking.
a. Fox challenges Chinchilla to a race.
b. Peacock mentioned that she and Cat overheard about the race and encouraged Chinchilla to accept the challenge.
4. Ext. Race track, night
Fox sets a trap for Chinchilla so that he will lose on the race.
Fox digs a hole and covers it with leaves as camouflage.
5. Ext. Race track, day
a. Fox and Chinchilla prepare for the race.
b. Cat kisses Chinchilla for good luck and Fox became annoyed.
c. Fox intentionally lets Chinchilla to gain speed first to lure him to the trap.
d. Fox heard Cat’s supporting chant to Chinchilla.
e. Fox turns around and gained speed.
f. He runs towards the trap, and tried to brake but he didn’t have enough time.
g. Fox fell down the trap.
a. Fox hates that Cat kisses Chinchilla.
b. Cat yells a supporting chant for Chinchilla.
c. The crowd chants for Chinchilla as well and some of them dissed the Fox because he is losing.
d. Fox yells to the crowd that he won’t lose.
e. A loud scream of Fox when he fell into the trap with a loud thump.
6. Int. Trap hole, night
Fox curls inside the hole alone, sadly staring at the moon.
Fox thinks that Cat will despise him even more.
7. Int. Trap hole, dawn
a. A rope came down and touched Fox’ nose.
b. Chinchilla succeeded to pull Fox out with the rope.
a. Chinchilla tells Fox to hurry up and work together to get him out.
8. Ext. Race track, dawn
a. Fox attacks Chinchilla by pinning him to the ground.
b. Chinchilla didn’t fight back.
c. At the end, Fox loosen his grip and lets Chinchilla go.
d. Chinchilla hugs Fox and comforts them.
a. Fox was angry because he thought that Chinchilla helps him just to humiliate him and gain fame.
b. Chinchilla says that he believes that Fox is a good guy. Thus, he didn’t fight back.
c. Fox realizes his mistakes. He’s ashamed.
d. Chinchilla forgives Fox.


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